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Post  Dark_Mega1 on February 9th 2009, 8:21 am

No...lets just say SwordFall doesnt have a description...and you DEFINITELY dont have a nice arrival.....
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Post  Darkman Alex on February 9th 2009, 8:39 am

what do ya mean doesnt have a description? u mean lets just say its a island?
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Post  Dark_Mega1 on February 9th 2009, 8:50 am

Chapter VIII Wicked Dragonmaster
Chapter Idea from Axzerus and Wicked Dragonmaster

They climbed up the small hill that led to the main plaza of ShadowFall, where they found an unpleasant site...the ENTIRE army of ShadowFall lined up and led by their king, Jona Wizard (dont worry ax!) Jona saw them, and immediately..called off his army?
"Triton was supposed to take you aboard the prison ship, he has unfortunately failed us, and he died from the ships attack, he deserved it," Jona said.
"What are you going to do with us?!" Connor shouted at Jona.
"I will Silence You!!!" he lunged at Connor and sent him flying into the building behind them, with a sword through him.
"Connor! CONNOR!!!" Alex shouted. "You'll pay."
"Yeah he will," A voice says, and a car comes speeding into the plaza and a gunshot is heard as Jona falls to the ground, the car's door flies open, and a sorceror jumps out of the opening and says, "I am Dark General #2,Wicked Dragonmaster, the teams Lvl. 10 Wizard!!" He cast a fire spell at Seth who avoided it and then lunged at Exodia, "So the traitor is here..." he said as he began to chant
From the land of the living! I call upon the land of the dead! To unleash thy Fury Of Thunder!! INDIGNA-" A sword was thrusted through Wicked, and his voice was cut off, a Blade held by...BladeWarrior. Wicked fell dead with one last thing to say, "DARKNESS DEVOURS!!!" then, they knew the source.

[i]End of chapter 8, chapter 9 coming soon


Well...Anyway, does anybody get the reference from Wicked's Spell Chants?
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Post  BladeWarrior on February 9th 2009, 9:37 am

No i didnt what did it come from?

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Post  Wicked Dragonmaster on February 9th 2009, 7:16 pm

i think its either from a game or a movie. I dont know

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Post  BladeWarrior on February 10th 2009, 1:04 am

Lol wait a minute I just read through it again did I just kill wicked? Sad oh noes!

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Post  Dark_Mega1 on February 10th 2009, 4:14 am

yes you did =P
he was gonna kill Exodia if you didnt...wicked really wanted a driveby shooting lol...so i put it in...oh and your never guess who the Dark Overlord is Revealed in next Chapter mehehe...
and no it IS NOT Dark_Flame...
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Post  BladeWarrior on February 10th 2009, 5:08 am

dam I was gonna guess that. Could it be???? nah it cant be...

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Post  Wicked Dragonmaster on February 10th 2009, 6:41 am

So its not the typo version either? You know, dark lame....

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Post  Dark_Mega1 on February 10th 2009, 7:18 am

lol no its not Dark_Lame either
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Re: The Dark Generals! (Book 1)

Post  Dark_Mega1 on February 10th 2009, 7:35 am

Chapter IX Under The Hood

"So Wicked Dragonmaster has fallen too," The Dark Overlord said, "You are my only remaining Dark General, Dark_Mega1."
"Exodia betrayed us, and Wicked is dead...sounds like a fitting end to weaklings like them...they had to beg to get in..." Mega said.
"They beat my strongest Dark Monsters though....," He was cut off by a buzzing sound from his computer. The DD # went from 2/3 to 1/3. Signally a Darkness Devours has been used, Dark Overlord said, "Wicked before he died must have devoured that worthless city, lets see if good ol' Alex can live through this one, he always was good at surviving things, like mine in SwordHaven, they trusted me...hehehe, Mega! Being my last surviving General, i will show you my face."
"Yes, finally!" Mega said.
The Dark Overlord removed his hood to reveal a shocking site to Mega, He said, "It is I, Artix Von Krieger!"
"What no way! The king of SwordHaven?!" Mega shouted.
"Yes," Artix said, "They all trusted me! But i was never on their side! Time to fool them once more! They will die if you...my Dark General #1, fails to destroy them."
"I will not fail you Dark Lord Artix."

End of Chapter 9, Chapter 10 coming soon...And All Shall End
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Post  BladeWarrior on February 10th 2009, 8:20 am

WHAT?!!?!?!?!?!? My own (fake) FATHER?? now that raises up a lot of questions...

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Post  Darkman Alex on February 10th 2009, 8:31 am

artix?!?! wow not sure where ya going with this..nut cant wait to find out =D
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Post  Dark_Mega1 on February 10th 2009, 9:38 am

=D i was expecting that response...i cant wait till u guys see whats in store in the final 2 chapters of the story...another character will die...and the biggest suprise of all is yet to come!!!
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Re: The Dark Generals! (Book 1)

Post  Axzerus on February 10th 2009, 9:53 am

O.....MY......GOD

O....EM....EFF....GEE

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Post  Darkman Alex on February 10th 2009, 10:01 am

haha your story has reached the top of the list....this is now the most of veiwed and most replyed topic on the forum
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Re: The Dark Generals! (Book 1)

Post  Dark_Mega1 on February 10th 2009, 10:28 am

ax u will not be in this story...sry...but u will be the main character in the sequel, The Corruption, any guesses on wat it might be? its a partially true story...well...lets try to clear things up

Chapter X Destruction Of Strong Bonds

Outside the ruins of the ShadowFall Empire, our heros awake to see they have all survived a second devistating Dark Cloud attack, they are met by something they hoped ot to see...
"Dark_Mega1," Exodia whispered, "You sure picked the worst time to attack huh? You always were the smart one,"
"Do not talk to me, Traitor, I have come to bring a message from my Dark Overlord, he says your destruction is now! And must bring it to you!" Mega shouted. A flash of Dark hit him, and he fell to the ground.
"The strongest warrior in the world, his power is mine!" Artix shouted as here appeared in front of Alex. "Alex, how i wished i didnt have to do this."
"Artix...I knew it was you...you planned this whole thing, didnt you, the chance to give you power and to destroy ShadowFall, but you had to betray your friends to do it." Darkman Alex said to him.
"Let me tell you my story, for i am no longer the artix you once knew...this was all planned by me, no I Am The Great Corruptor, i needed this power so i took over Artix, and made a brilliant plan, allow me to tell you...i used the dark to attack SwordHaven, and when the n00bs attack, I ordered my 3 Dark Generals to trick them into siding with me, so i could find a way to get rid of all 3 of you, then, i Sent a Dark Clound and destroyed my pathetic city, and vanished away, leaving behind a random peasant, and i warped his mind to make him believe i was his father, then you had your worthless journey and blah blah blah, and now i will syphon your power, and destroy Lore!"
Dark_Mega1 slowly got up and said, "So...Exodia was...right...you were just using us."
"Where is the Real Artix!?" Darkman Alex shouted.
"He is gone...vanished away into Darkness," The Corruptor answered. "Well let's end this! I can't stand looking at Worthless Beings Like you!!"
"No," BladeWarrior said. "He's lieing, he is the real Artix. I can tell, father, why."
"Your to smart my son...i could never fool you," Artix said, "It is mostly True, all except the part about the corruptor taking over me...but there's more...i was never on your side, I created the SwordHaven Warriors, you guys, so you could gather power for me, i have always been the Dark Overlord, i knew i would be hunted in the time of the Great Heros of Warlic, Robin, Galanoth, and all the others, so i pretended to fight evil...i was fidgeting then not because of being anxious, but from fear of destroying my soldiers, but when all the hero's died, the day the Dark Cloud hit, the final Hero had died...anyone notice...and that is it...I made up the lie because i didnt want to hurt you...I've grown so good...i couldnt hurt people i could call...friends...but now i realize! i was gonna kill them in the end! Give up you Fools..and Die!!!"

End of Chapter 10, Final Chapter coming soon
It may still be confusing to you, and it may be confusing to the end...you may never get it, but the story must end!
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Re: The Dark Generals! (Book 1)

Post  Dark_Mega1 on February 10th 2009, 10:48 am

This is where things get confusing

FINAL CHAPTER The Truth...of everything

"There is only one way to defeat the Dark Overlord!" Exodia shouted. "But only Mega knows it!"
"I...cant" Mega said.
"Please your our last hope!" Alex said.
"We need you to help," Blade said
"It's for everyone in Lores fate," said Seth.
"Come on," Exodia said.
He finally said," A...loved one...must use all...their power...to stop the...evil...that's why i...couldnt tell u...Blade...Warrior...u must...stop him."
"No!" Seth shouted, "There must be another way!"
The Dark Overlord finally attacked, he shot a beam of Darkness at Mega and shouted, "DARKNESS DEVOURS!!!!!!!" The Dark Cloud circled around Mega was engulfing him and the last of his power, he said," Blade...Warrior...please..."
"I must!" Blade Shouted, "Alex...I'm sorry." He focused all of his power into his sword, and dove into Artix and shouted, "GoodBye, DAD!!!!"
Artix shouted so loud all of Lore could hear it, "WHY!!!! I HAD IT ALL!!!!!!!!" and him and Blade vanished into a cloud of Oblivion, and a small stone appeared where they were, the Stone of Power.
"He did have the stone," Dark said, "The stone concealling the power of the Great Corruptor, this explains what happened to him, whoever grabs the stone gets images of great Dark Power, so it is called the Dark Stone, he was being controlled by The Great Corruptor, and didn't even know it."
"Blade!!!" Alex cried,"why...."
"Alex it's all over now, we must head back to SwordHaven," Seth said.
"Right...you're right...there was no way to avoid the death of Blade, we must continue our lives, and stop this kind of Catastrophe, from ever happening again," Alex said confidently, "Let's go home..."

THE END


Epilouge Coming Soon
If you've ever played Fire Emblem, it will be a Fire Emblem Styled Epilouge.
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Post  Darkman Alex on February 10th 2009, 11:14 am

round of applause!!!!

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cheers cheers cheers cheers cheers cheers

well u might wanna change the title to The Swordhaven Warriors: Book 1 (then some kinda secodn title
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Post  Wicked Dragonmaster on February 10th 2009, 11:16 am

Axzerus wrote:O.....MY......GOD

O....EM....EFF....GEE

Z...O...M...G....

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my favorite words/abbreviations. And im not the only one with magic.....kinda depressing...... really good though

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Post  Dark_Mega1 on February 10th 2009, 11:42 am

EPILOUGE Everything Thereafter

Seth2014 :Seth's life didnt change much after the war, he continued to be one of the 3 Light Commanders, and served the New King all his life

Exodia1010 :Exodia took The place of Connor20133, and became a Light Commander. He became #2 after besting Seth in Battle

Darkman Alex :Becoming the 3rd King of SwordHaven, he rebuilt SwordHaven, and was the strongest, most only loyal king they ever had, he led them to time of great strength

Dark_Mega1 :Dark became The Light Commander in the Place of Alex, he quickly became #1, winning in a 2 on 1 battle against the other Commanders


Still to come, Alex becomes Corrupted By the Great Corruptor, freed ny the Dark Stone, and 3 heroes must rise to stop the Corruption, but the Corruptor, Dark_Flame, was not the only one concealed within the stone...
Book 2,The Corruption


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Post  Wicked Dragonmaster on February 10th 2009, 11:44 am

ownage.... Hurry up with the next chapter!!

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Post  BladeWarrior on February 10th 2009, 12:26 pm

Wow that story was sooo.... epic.... though it is kinda funny how i use a mace now but oh well. I am really looking forward to the sequal. *reporters voice* I give this story 5 *'s! Smile

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Re: The Dark Generals! (Book 1)

Post  Darkman Alex on February 11th 2009, 8:48 am

haha nice story sounds like ya gotta fight me next round >=)

u going to continue book 2 here? or make a new topic?
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Post  Dark_Mega1 on February 11th 2009, 11:43 am

make a new topic, and make it another flashing circle board =P
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