The Corruption! (Book 2)

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Re: The Corruption! (Book 2)

Post  Dark_Mega1 on April 17th 2009, 8:19 am

I will say this...one main character will die (other than Flame)

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Post  Dark_Mega1 on April 18th 2009, 5:33 am

CHAPTER XIV A Test For "Our Heroes"

"Why is Melanie following him?" Mega asked.
"I will tell you, right after "Our Hero" here can complete my challenge, He11ix!" Zak shouted and pointed at He11ix, who quickly ran over to Zak, Zak whispered something in his ear, and He11ix pulled out his Axe, Zak laughed and said, "Axzerus! A duel of axes is what we are testing you with! Nat put up the fence." Nat pulled the lever releasing the chain fence around the circle in the center of the throne room, Axzerus pulled out his Axe and Zak screamed, "BEGIN!" A fireball shot out He11ix's Axe and missed Ax by an inch.
"What!?" Blade shouted.
"Hahaha!! Tomahawk! Seize and kill them all!" Zak shouted, and Tomahawk pulled out his...Tomahawk...and swung it at Exodia, he shouted, "Holy Might!" and it sent Tomahawk flying towards the back wall right above the throne.
"What!?" He11ix shouted, "Zak what are you doing? You've betrayed us! Why?"
"Because He11ix, we deserve to serve in the castle not them!"
"This is not right!" He11ix destroyed the fence and ran out and shouted to Axzerus, "Stop Zak! I'm going to contact Melanie and tell her we've been betrayed!" Nat got out of his way and he picked up the telegraph machine, Nat ran out and sealed the door. Ax picked up Tomahawk's Tomahawk and threw it at Zak, striking him right in his thigh, he fell down out of his throne to his knees, Mega said, "This is for-"
"Let me handle this!" Melanie interrupted, "You've betrayed Lore, it is our place here."
"Melanie, dont you understand?" Zak said.
"It is you who doesnt understand, Im leading PoL now, your time is done."
"Mel, you arent really!"
"Good bye...brother."
"MELANIE!" and she stabbed her knife through his chest, and Zak became silent.

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Re: The Corruption! (Book 2)

Post  Darkman Alex on April 18th 2009, 8:11 am

lol your enjoying this arent u? welp is it my turn to kick some booty?
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Re: The Corruption! (Book 2)

Post  Dark_Mega1 on April 18th 2009, 10:00 am

You dont know how fun it is! =D XD

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Post  Dark_Mega1 on April 18th 2009, 12:06 pm

CHAPTER XV(PART ONE) Yulgar's Inn , A False Conclusion

After getting to know each other better, the group of, Dark_Mega1, BladeWarrior, Melanie, and He11ix (there was more but these were the most important ones, im leaving Thomas395 and Scolor out) headed over to the newly rebuilt Yulgars Inn, Exodia didnt come, for he was the reason it was destroyed in the first place (Along with Blade's Sheild) they discussed the situation...
"I have a conclusion, but it is very unexpected," Mega said, all the others looked at him, "Earlier, i got a letter from Seth saying he was trying to revive the one that saved his life he said You know who it is, we all want our friend back he must have thought i thought it was Alex...but no..it was Artix, I'm thinking Seth is working with them, i think we have been betrayed, he sold Alex to Flame."
Right when he was finishing, Seth walked in the door, "You think I betrayed you!? I thought it was Alex that saved me...it was a long time ago."
"Explain Seth...now," Melanie said.
"You're here too? Oh great... I didnt know! You heard me Melanie call Alex back."
"Maybe that was just cause I was there...hm?"
"Dont Listen to him! He is trying to DECEIVE YOU ALL!

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Re: The Corruption! (Book 2)

Post  Dark_Mega1 on April 18th 2009, 12:23 pm

CHAPTER XV(PART TWO) Alex Saved!

...it is true, he sold Alex to me," Alamex said, and he chuckled.
"So it is true, everyone, ATTACK!" He11ix shouted, only him and Melanie pulled out their weapons, and Seth shouted at them, "STOP! GUYS!" and they stopped to listen, "He are you going to believe, the Corruptor working for the Lord of Doom, or a Light Commandor of SwordHaven's Army."
"He's Right," Dark_Mega1 said, "We shouldnt believe this Corruptor." They all pulled out their weapons at Alamex.
"Hmph, you're making a TERRIBLE MISTAKE!" Alamex shouted, "You cannot defeat me! The Great Corruptor!"
"I know we can! We have no choice but kill you..." Seth said.
"I hate to admit it but he's right," Ax said, Seth glared at him.
"We end this now," Mega said.
"DIE!" Blade shouted, they charged, and all the power went out.
"A blackout!?" Seth shouted, "Now!?" and the lights came back on, but Dark_Flame was gone, leaving Alex's body on the ground.


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Re: The Corruption! (Book 2)

Post  Dark_Mega1 on April 18th 2009, 12:38 pm

EPILOUGE A Proclamation Of War

3 weeks after the incident with Dark_Flame, a messenger of SwordHaven brought a letter to King Alex, as he began to roll out the scroll, he read...WE ARE COMING TO DESTROY YOUR COUNTRY! THERE IS NOTHING YOU CAN DO TO STOP US! Alex was shocked, a war? Now? He continued to open the letter to reveal identity of the sender...

Nat, Admin of Lore's Elementals


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Re: The Corruption! (Book 2)

Post  BladeWarrior on April 19th 2009, 5:52 am

Whoa, awsome.. btw yes they do, Ur JuSt DoIn It WrOnG

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Re: The Corruption! (Book 2)

Post  Dark_Mega1 on April 19th 2009, 7:14 am

BladeWarrior wrote:Whoa, awsome.. btw yes they do, Ur JuSt DoIn It WrOnG

What is this about?

Was it about the "Not all stories can have happy endings" quote?

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Re: The Corruption! (Book 2)

Post  BladeWarrior on April 19th 2009, 10:54 am

Yea, using the famous internet meme.

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Re: The Corruption! (Book 2)

Post  Darkman Alex on April 20th 2009, 4:19 am

haha nice ending....great book dark...u got the flahsing red dot again

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