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Post  Charon(retired) on July 9th 2009, 5:39 am

Discuss my story here.
Please don't post on the actual story thread.
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Post  Darkman Alex on July 9th 2009, 5:59 am

ill have to read your story tomrow night charon

cant wiat though

i got start reading these books...and i gotta mesmorize some more plays so i wont be on tomorow till after football but i will read it!
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Post  Wicked Dragonmaster on July 9th 2009, 6:09 am

really awesome story! (i have no idea what some of the words mean but i know some) really good!

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Post  Aeonarial on July 9th 2009, 11:36 pm

You already know about what I think about your story, just wanted to post here, and ask if you will have sneak peeks?
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Post  Charon(retired) on July 10th 2009, 12:59 am

Sneak Peeks? How exactly would that work?
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Post  Irockall655 on July 10th 2009, 1:00 am

why would you need sneak peeks
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Re: Charon: Scion of Shadow (discussion)

Post  Darkman Alex on July 10th 2009, 3:15 am

i like your story charon..makes me feel like im watching a ninja movie

really nice

now i got 2 storys 2 read if dark ecery adds another chapter XD
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Post  Dark_Mega1 on July 10th 2009, 3:16 am

Lol woops i should prolly do that soon...

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Re: Charon: Scion of Shadow (discussion)

Post  BladeWarrior on July 10th 2009, 5:20 am

Wow that's an amazing plot Charon, are you gonna do sequels with different elements?

P.S Scion reminds me of the reign plate Very Happy

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Re: Charon: Scion of Shadow (discussion)

Post  Charon(retired) on July 10th 2009, 5:38 am

Thanks for the positive feedback everyone!

And Blade, thanks! Actually the story encompasses all of the eight scions and their struggles against each other.

The definition of a scion is a descendant or heir, for those of you who don't know.
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Post  Wicked Dragonmaster on July 10th 2009, 5:40 am

aahhhh thanks that helped =) makes more sense after knowing that

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Post  Darkman Alex on July 11th 2009, 6:01 am

i love how u ended chapter 3 lol XD aweosme bro
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Re: Charon: Scion of Shadow (discussion)

Post  Seth2014 on July 11th 2009, 8:37 am

Charon I think you make too many topics you could have asked people how it was in AQW or somewhere else you didn't have to make a whole new topic, that's why we hade to clean out the forums they were flooding with your topics.

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Post  Darkman Alex on July 11th 2009, 9:50 am

um seth i think your wrong no offence bra

im the one who makes too many topics


look throught the archives

or the statistics

i make more topics then anyone else
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Re: Charon: Scion of Shadow (discussion)

Post  Charon(retired) on July 11th 2009, 10:14 am

Seth, my story post will be cleaner and easier to read without comments on it every time I post.
Plus, I don't make that many topics, I keep mine clean, and it was Alex and I who cleaned them up anyway.
Please stay on topic.
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Re: Charon: Scion of Shadow (discussion)

Post  Darkman Alex on July 14th 2009, 3:51 am

dagum lol u could write a book

im guessing this where the story realy begins

great story charon ready for next part
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Re: Charon: Scion of Shadow (discussion)

Post  Charon(retired) on July 14th 2009, 4:11 am

Yes, I have been creating this storyline my whole life, and just now writing it down.
The next part will be here soon!
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Re: Charon: Scion of Shadow (discussion)

Post  Irockall655 on July 14th 2009, 6:57 am

cool
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Re: Charon: Scion of Shadow (discussion)

Post  Charon(retired) on July 18th 2009, 8:36 am

I just added the Preface to Chapter Two, go check it out!
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Re: Charon: Scion of Shadow (discussion)

Post  Darkman Alex on July 18th 2009, 1:29 pm

that part made me feel like i was watching a movie lol!! thats aweosme if u can do that
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Re: Charon: Scion of Shadow (discussion)

Post  BladeWarrior on July 18th 2009, 1:45 pm

This reminds me of some ancient Japanese samari (sp?) movie, not that I watched any of them but if I watched a good one this would be it =D

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Post  Charon(retired) on July 18th 2009, 2:23 pm

Hehe, thankies. :3
I'm glad you guys like it. I thought it turned out quite well.
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Re: Charon: Scion of Shadow (discussion)

Post  BladeWarrior on July 23rd 2009, 4:31 am

Alright! Vampires? Kinda figured it out when you wrote comming back to life, but maybe you didn't hit anything vital.

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Re: Charon: Scion of Shadow (discussion)

Post  Charon(retired) on July 23rd 2009, 5:55 am

o.O
What the ****, Blade.
You're very good at guessing! xD
You'll see more soon!
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Re: Charon: Scion of Shadow (discussion)

Post  Wicked Dragonmaster on July 23rd 2009, 8:34 am

@bladewarrior spelt samurai (yeah kinda late thought id point it out though)

charon this is getting to be an interesting story. you should publish the book when ur done.

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